My Unedited Writing.

 This is the first draft of my story.It is an unedited Version

Once in a big farm where you can plant things and take care of your animals, there was a young man and his name was Billy. He was a traveller who travelled all around the world. Plus he tried new stuff from all sorts of country.

However the owner of this farm was Bob and his assistant Stan,who did everything to save his old plants and he would make trouble to anyone who plants new plants on his lawn.At some point there was this lovely kind lady who loved plants and she wanted to make new plants but you know who will stop her right BOB!

In one and hot day stuck on a plane for hours .Billy saw another country and he wanted to stop but he couldn't . So Bill went to the bathroom and there was an emergency getaway button, and guess what Billy pushed it.

Flying in the air Billy didn't know what to do so he remembered that he had a parachute on his back and he pulled it and floated. Untitled he landed he ran and looked all around the country. Suddenly he meet this young women and her name was lovely Jasmine.She greeted him with delight “Hello my name is Jasmine and I am a country girl,How do you do?”

Jasmine said greatly.”Let me introduce myself,my name is Billy and what a fine country you have? Billy said looking into the eyes of sweet eyes.”I know its amazing right.”  Jasmine said as she was stroking her lovely black hair. “Why do you have not that much plants in your farm?”Billy said mischievously. “Well you see there is this mean trouble maker, who loves his plants and  he wont let us plant any new ones.” Jasmine said as she was disappointed.

TO BE CONTINUED......

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