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Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Scary Doll Retail


The town was empty no one was there just Alma. She felt very strange and weird too. Her mum told her to go out and win something.
While Alma was skipping in the freezing cold snow, she came to a large blackboard. Pulling a chalk out of her pocket, she wrote her name  - ALMA. Fabulous!!.

Hearing a strange sound, Alma went to the doll shop  window and wiped the snow off it. Up came a doll. Alma was surprised that this doll had the same colour hair. She had everything the same,  but not the right coloured eyes. Alma was very attracted to the doll, she really wanted to have it. Trying to open the door, Alma was angry. It was locked! She made a snow ball and chucked it on the door. Bam!! The door opened.

Alma was very happy. She opened the door and went inside. Dolls were everywhere, she was completely surrounded. Alma spotted her doll in the middle of the shop. While walking towards it,  she bumped into a boy on a bike. She lifted it up and it went right to the door he was warning Alma. But Alma was only interested in the doll that looked just like her. Alam looked up and the doll disappeared out of her sight. She was looking everywhere but it wasn't there. She found it up on the shelves.

Alam climbed up a chair and took one mitten off her hands. She was reaching and reaching and she got up towards her eyes and ZAP!!!! she went in. Heavy breathing she couldn't move anything except her eyes. She knew that that little boy on the bike was warning her. Then a new doll came up from the basement
DADADADA!!!!! NEXT PERSON IS GOING TO BE ATTRACTED TO THIS DISASTER

Friday, 2 November 2012

Charlie And The Chocolate Factory Retail




Poor Charlie hadn't eaten anything,his tummy was rumbling. While walking along the street, Charlie noticed something. He bent down and saw a silver coin in the drain. He grabbed it and went off feeling a little bit lucky........

As Charlie walked into the shop, he quickly thought  about which chocolate bar he wanted. He wanted the biggest one they had. “May I have a bar of scrumdiddlyumptious chocolate please? ” he asked the shopkeeper nicely. “ Sure you may” replied the shopkeeper. “Here you go” “Thank you” said Charlie “You're welcome” called the shopkeeper.

Ripping the wrapper off, Charlie shoved it in and didn't bother thinking if he had missed something. Charlie was very rude eating the chocolate greedly in the front of people.He walked out and thought “Should I get one more?” So Charlie went back and bought another one for Grandpa Joe. ”I would like to get one more please? “Sure” said the man giving Charlie the chocolate.

After Charlie had bought Grandpa Joe`s bar of chocolate, he walked slowly out the door. He saw a crowd gathering around the newspaper guy. ”Hey what's this yapping about?” asked Charlie “Have you read the newspaper. It said The Fifth Ticket was fake?” Charlie realised that he still had a chance to get that last ticket.

Charlie took the chocolate out of his bag and ripped the first layer. Carefully, Charlie opened the corner of the bar of chocolate. And there it was the last  golden ticket. Giving Charlie a huge fright, a lady pulled his arm and said “he`s got it he`s got it” Charlie was very frightened by the crowd of jostling people. ”Hey leave him alone” yelled the newspaper man. Charlie was pushing and trying to get through the crowd. ”Run home Charlie and don`t stop until to get there”.

Monday, 29 October 2012

Nikita Picture 2


Benny is 22 years old, he is a perfectionist bull fighter. He is really scared. “Should I do this?” whispered Benny ”I just have to”

Because of that Benny wasn't thinking right, he was stupid.  Benny is cracked in the head. I did not know what he was thinking.

Crowd is cheering “whoo whoo” screamed all of Benny`s fans.“I`m gonna do it he said”. Off he went. He jumped with a big smile on his face. As he jumped the bull stood on him and hit him with his huge horns.

Benny`s mum got out of her seat and was running down the chairs. ”Wake up wake up” yelled mum. Mum called the ambulance and they came. They picked up Benny and took Benny to the hospital. Benny really missed bull fighting after that accident.

Wednesday, 24 October 2012

My Imagination


“Hurry Hurry”shouted Gabby and her friends. Driving down to the beach for a family picnic,Gabby and her friends and family went to play in the sand.”Should we build a sandcastle asked Gabby “yeah we can” replied all of Gabby`s friends.So Gabby and her friends made a sandcastle.

As Gabby and her friends were changing, they yelled out “Lets go for a swim now!” “Yeah Lets go” Gabby yelled back.

While they were swimming ,Gabby went too far and she found out she was in the middle of nowhere.”Where am I ,is anyone there?” screamed Gabby. Gabby was really sacred.


Swimming as fast as she could, she finally got out and Gabby`s friends helped her up. Her eyes were shut.She woke up and Gabby never ever never!!  went near that sea again.

Friday, 19 October 2012

The Halloween Fight


Dressing up for Halloween we got our costumes. I was a Clown with a colorful wig and my brother was a stupid ugly Ninja.While walking home with a big bucket of halloween lollies I quickly snatched the lollies off him.”Give it back” said my brother “No you don't deserve it I'm the oldest one so I should get it” I replied selfishly. Mum came out, slapped me and my brother on the head, took the lollies and sent us to our room.

Tuesday, 16 October 2012

The Tsunami


Ben is 8 years old he is a kind and lovely boy. He lives with his nana and her name is Granny Jojo, she is a grumpy mean old bully bag woman.

“Tsunami’’ “Tsunami”, “Tsunami”!!!!! Yelled  Ben the one morning while listening to the radio. “it's heading right for New York” “Ahhh” screamed his grumpy nana. People could hear them on the other side of the road.

Granny Jojo said “stop scaring people with this nonsense of yours” “But Granny Jojo” said Ben with puppy eyes  “NO not another word” replied Granny Jojo. The next thing they both heard were people on the streets below shouting “Here it comes. The tsunami”.

Looking at the drive way there was a flood caused by the tsunami.As Ben walked past to see what happened from the tsunami he was surpised to see all the other neighbours having fun.Joining in with the fun Ben diceded to stand on some bricks ready to jump off.
He jumped in the air with his arms up and his legs holding tight together.SPLASHH!!!!!   His arm had broken.


When Granny  pulled up Ben she quickly check and see If he was ok Granny  said “wake up Ben don’t you make me panic like that again.” When Ben woke up he found out he was in the hospital. “Mmmm Granny is that you?” said Ben “yes it is my sweet little angel” replied Granny. So Granny and BEN went home

Monday, 15 October 2012

What Is A Toy?


This picture shows
 what we discovered about
 What is a toy?