Reading Raps

Here is our movie about raping and its all about reading.HOPE YOU ENJOY.
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My Punctuation Goals

Here you see my Writing Goals for this term.

Girlz Rock! Snowball Attack

Title: Girlz Rock Snowball Attack

Author: Jacqueline Arena

Characters (Rachel and Ellie little girls, Best friends,Throwing Snowballs, not paying attention ):

Setting (Mostly outside in the snow making snow balls.Freezing cold and amazing snow flakes and running around in the snow with their snow boots.

What was the problem? The problem was when suddenly they got hit on the back with 2 snowballs from their neighbours.

What was the solution? Yeah I'm ready to chill out big time!

Was there a plot twist? When Rachel picks up a hand full of snow and shapes it into a snowball and went to their neighbours house Jim and Tims and they knocked onto the door and Ellie opens the door and stepped aside and she tossed the snowball into the door and the snowball didn't get the boys they got the boys father.

My favourite part of the book was? My favourite part was when Rachel made a snow angel with her legs and arms.

If I could change the ending it would end like this? Come on lets go home and play on my play station,and maybe we can watch the game tonight.

Would I read this book again? Yes I will because it is fun and cool and plus I am a girl .GIRLZ ROCK. I love this book it has to be my favourite one out of all of the books I have read.

My Book Review

Title:  Dan`s Day aged 9

Characters (Dan,Elsie,Chops,Grandma,Grandpa and the two sisters,short and tall. personalities, strengths, weaknesses):

Setting: Mostly At Home and school.

What was the problem? When they came back from school they started arguing outside their house.

What was the solution? A whole week is gone and tomorrow is Monday again. Happy ENDING.

Was there a plot twist? When they got home their mother found out that she has been making a big bill on the telephone.Because she has been wondering what her friends are doing,plus she votes for T.V programs.

My favourite part of the book was? The part I like is when Sean goes crazy and disappointed.

If I could change the ending it would end like this? It will be amazing if I could do this all over again.And next time I will make it more interesting and with more detail.

Would I read this book again? Yes I will because the author has done an amazing job and the illustrator fantastic writing.But I think that It would`not be out by the time I am old.

Nikita`s Nga Manawa

Here is a little presentation about Nga Manawa. Nga Manawa is the moari word for Mangroves. I have been learning about Mangroves in reading. I hope you enjoy it.